Hello my name is Prayogo Prima Wahyudi from X-B.Last Wednesday i interviewed my friend about their opinion about Indonesian Movie now
Movies
Most of teen in the world love to watch movie, i asked 8 of my friend and all of them said they love watch movie it isn't strange for me cause movie is a new way to entertain ourself. Ussualy Boy's love watch Action,Thriller,Horror and Comedy film,while the Girl's love watch Drama and Romantic Movie. Then i asked their opinion about indonesian movie now,from 8 people only 1 people said indonesian movie is not bad,and the other's said "indonesian movie is suck", well i think most of Indonesian movie now is terrible,but not all of them is bad, movie like Merah Putih Trilogy,Laskar Pelangi,Ayat-Ayat Cinta is a example of good movies from indonesia
"Merah Putih II:Darah Garuda"
We all know that the government is banned all holywood movie cause the importer didn't pay taxes from 1995(except Hary Potter and Transformer),well we still had a tons of indonesian movie but like i said only a few thats nice, a director like Riri Riza,Hanung Bramantyo,Yadi Sugandi etc can make a fine movie but can' their movies replace all banned holywood movie??? the answer is impossible for now
in the future? who knows
so i asked my friend,their opinion about indonesian movie in the future, most of them confident in the future indonesian movie won't suck like now
The Conclusion
We agreed that Almost all Indonesian movie is terrible,it's only about Horror,(NotFunny)Comedy,and Fan Service genre, but if we support Indonesian Movie Industry i'm sure in the next 5 years we can make our own Harry Potter movie Hell Yeah!!!
"Pray For Indonesian Movie"
Hello Prayogo,
BalasHapusYour essay is focused on the topic of movies. It started with your friends opinions about genres of movies they like, and how they hate Indonesian movies cause they are suck. However, there still are some nice movies like Merah Putih, Laskar Pelangi, etc that made by good directors such as Riri Riza, which made you and your friends feel confident about the future of Indonesian movies.
It's pretty good. The main idea is caught by the people who read it. And you put some pictures which made your essay enjoyable to be read. You put a conclusion too, that counts much for boys.
But, your grammars, capitalizations, and punctuation are quite awful. First, how you put 's and s weren't right. Second, you didn't really care about writing 'are' after things that many. Next, you wrote I as yourself with small i. You also used capital alphabets in random words and didn't use it in the actual word who supposed to use it, like the first sentence of the paragraph.
You didn't use tab in every new paragraph. You didn't put space after coma. Most important, you rarely put full-stops, which makes me don't know when to stop reading a sentence! Finally, well..... You wrote a bad word on the last sentence in the last paragraph.
And by the way................... You put a lot of 'now' in inappropriate place so they don't make sense for me while reading it.
But still, for me, it's a good and fun essay!
-Nisya Putri Shaliha (29) XB Group 5