Selasa, 02 Agustus 2011

What They Said

 I'm Ihsan Aring Trisarjono, class X-B. This morning I interviewed 4 friends of mine via blackberry messenger about what their opinion in these 3 topics, which are, gadget, music, and movie. So here we go.

Gadget
On a day just like this maybe we've heard the words said "World without gadget is no world". So I asked my friends, what do they need gadget for. And some said that they prefer the functions from its own gadget and the others choose the facilities, in this case we take sample handphone. And well.. They use their handphone can be a whole day, or just in needed. And from its functions and facilities, they like to chat, listen to the music, camera, or browsing the internet.

Music
Who doesn't love music?, indirectly, everything we heard can be music, though it's only a little sound or combination from sounds and voices such breath, people speaking, the wind's blowing, things are making sound, and so on. Well, that's what Mr. Dodi said in music class. And my friends as well, they do love music, some friends like pop music, rock music, it depends on their taste. They just like to hear it but a few said that they wish to play it in instruments such as guitar or piano. And most of them told me that they listen to music when they got bored, do you think music can decrease boredom?

Movie
Besides music, people love to watch movie. And that's me and my friends. Generally, they love to watch action movie, comedy, and for the girls, they usually like romantic movies. Mostly, people watch movies in cinema or theatre with their friends, or family, girlfriend or boyfriend, etc. But not a few also who likes to watch movies from dvds in their home. Well.. The good things is they can rewind or pause they favorite scene, hehe. And yeah, lot of people love to watch Hollywood movies rather than Indonesia has. As you know, Indonesian movies mostly are horror. But it's not all of it, Indonesia still has a lot of good and educating movies, such as Laskar Pelangi, Serdadu Kumbang, Nagabonar jadi 2, etc. And I say, keep up the good work Indonesia #PrayForIndonesianMovies. 

In the end, each students has their own interest and way of life. They can use their gadget as they want, listen to their favorite songs, and watch their favorite movies without no one can forbid them. I'm Ihsan Aring Trisarjono and this is Black and White (?).
 

2 komentar:

  1. Nice formatting, it looks easy on the eyes.

    The music section is a bit too long winded, you could have probably just skipped to the main idea first before starting to describe what music is. 'Who doesn't love music?, indirectly, everything we heard can be music.....' could be erased/shortened.

    Good supporting sentences, they support the main idea well, although you could have made the topic sentence clearer.

    This sentence somehow bothers me quite a bit. ' And some said that they prefer the functions from its own gadget and the others choose the facilities' .... Aren't 'function' and 'facility' a bit similar? Maybe you should look for a different word that makes the meaning a bit clearer. And I don't really get what it means by 'functions from its own gadget.'

    There are also quite a few grammar mistakes, such as 'everything we heard can be music'=hear, 'In the end, each students'=each student, etc.

    Overall, this entry was pretty good! I can get the main idea.

    BalasHapus
  2. the comment above was posted by Savanna Berlian Segara, XB, group 5.

    BalasHapus