My name is Dina Ramadhanti from XB, I have interviewed five of my friends in the class which is all girls, the question is concerned about technology and culture. The aim of this report is to inform what the opinions and favorite teens about technology and culture.
TECHNOLOGY
This time technology is important, almost everyone has a wide range of technologically advanced electronic devices. The most favorite technologies for the teenager are mobile phone, laptop, and iPod, because these three things are the most important thing for communication or doing homework. now this technology is important to life. The positive side of technology is that it can make it easier to get some new information, but technology has also a negative side that we can be addicted to.
Now we're not so surprised to see the development of globalization in Indonesia, so many cultures from other countries that entered Indonesia without first sorted. According to my friend there are some foreign cultures coming into Indonesia but not so in accordance with Indonesian culture that is fashion and relationships. They have their own way to maintain the culture of Indonesia in order not displaced by foreign cultures such as studying and practicing the Indonesian dance, promoting the product in country, and to make Indonesia more attractive culture.
The conclusion is that most of my friend like technologies such as mobile phones, laptops, and iPod, they suggest the technology has its positive and negative sides, my friend also has their own way to the business and culture of Indonesia is not displaced by foreign cultures
-Dina Ramadhanti XB/13
I think this is very good essay because i can easilly get the point in each paragraph. I just want to suggest you to replaced the word of "now" in the beginning of sentence with "currently" and don't forget to use capital in the beginning of sentence
BalasHapusRayhan Sri Bayu N XB/34 (group5)